Colorless

[jkkitty]

Title: Colorless
Rating: PG
Genre: Suggestive
Table 2, Prompt 79 - Chalk
Word count - 100
(first posted in MFU 100)

His world had no color except the color of chalk because his partner may not live.

The walls surrounding them were white. The man in the bed seemed the same chalky white as his sheets and covers.whte

Even sound seems like white noise.

He might not make it the doctors said.

If this came to pass, his world never have color again.

Movement, a little color began to come from the bed.

As the movement became more visible and moans became louder, color was returning to his world.

“Illya?” The world was back splashed with color. His partner survived again.

Comments

[laurose8.livejournal.com]

This is a really good drabble. Well thought, and good reading.

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I do enjoy a challenge and that it comes out as I wanted.

[jkartes1.livejournal.com]

Very good. Enjoyed it

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I enjoyed coming up with another way to look at chalk.

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

Really well done.

[jkkitty.livejournal.com]

Thanks you, they do make a difference to each other.